The Dying Sun

 
We stood in fear
while the golden sphere
                   dipped low below the horizon
 
and many a cry
rose to the sky
                   as blackness covered creation
 
but I alone
did not bemoan
                   the dying of the sun
 
for ‘neath the waves
the light that saves
                   can never be undone
 
when bottomless black
will not hold back
                   but threatens to overwhelm
 
the dying sun
a ressurection
                   reclaims the longing realm
 
new arms of life
reach out of strife
                   an adundance beyond scope
 
a reminder when
dark comes again
                   in light remains our hope
 
 
 
NOTE: A sign of my inexperience with rhyme is how uncomfortable I always am with an end-result of rhyme experimentation. I like what the above poem says but it sounds like it comes from a much older era and somehow doesn’t fit in our own. Nevertheless I will, from time to time, experiment with rhyme.

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