Dark clouds circle ’round the sun
and M falls into despair
lost
ship sailing over the edge of the world
No dragons here
no
Nothing here
Just water melting into sky
and skydrops from the eyes
M keeps moving
and the clouds move too
till the sun that was outside is
the sun inside
forever.
That was such a beautiful poem!!!! I have to admit that I don\’t really know a lot about poetry, but that was just beautiful. I especially like the "water melting into sky" and the "skydrops". Wow, Pete, I had no idea you had it in you. 🙂
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thank you for this poem, i was surfing and came across it. Your words touched me right where and when i needed. Thank you.
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Congratulations Pete! Some beautiful poetry. I especially enjoyed "Angel", "Eve Rises", "Father II", and "I am". Keep up the good work!
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